In a followup comment, Don Neff pointed out that the strip at the bottom of the photo could use some detail added back in as well.
Here’s take 3:
I darkened the sky just a skotch more – this version seems nicely in balance to me – although my good friend and pro photography Chris Gulker votes with Ansel Adams for the first version (with the almost black sky)! Seems like dark skies are an “acquired taste”!